How Revisions are like a Sewing Project
I've been formulating an extended metaphor for how writing a novel is like sewing a dress, it goes something like this . . .
If a muslin mock-up is like an outline, then putting the rough draft together is like sewing the dress pieces into a cohesive whole. Then first draft revisions is when you are taking apart seams and fixing your mistakes. After the editor has looked at it second time, then it's all about tailoring. After that you can add the finishing touches like ruffles and descriptions, check your seams (fact checking and continuity) and put on buttons. Then it's a nice ironing (copyedits). And ta da! A finished garment. Or manuscript.
I'm getting a little confused here, ah, extended metaphors.
Right now, however, with this book, I'm back to picking apart seams. I sewed it together using entirely the wrong thread, shall we say?
My favorite part, is the tailoring phase, but that's looking like it won't come until the second set of revisions. Still, I don't mind what I'm doing now, it's just more work than I thought. I had set up my sewing room for tailing, as it were, when I find out I'm redoing all the seams instead.
The best part of any dress is putting together the outfit at the end. Adding accessories such as cover art, back cover copy, blurbs, author bio and so forth. That's what you all, the readers, get to see. In that way writing a book is exactly like making a dress, we are all walking around hopefully you won't look too closely at the seams!
Metaphor for the win!
In other news, I'm still finding time to tweet so if you follow me on Facebook or Twitter there are some updates there. I am slow to respond to comments though. Sorry about that.
GAIL'S DAILY DOSE
Your Infusion of Cute . . .
Your Tisane of Smart . . .
Your Writerly Tinctures . . .
7 POV Basics
I should note that in Soulless, because I was working a parody of victorian literature I did not obey these rules. I was practicing the oft objectionable head hoping. I don't mind it as much as the modern reader, I blame too many Dickens novels. But there it is. And the book sold anyway. Just be careful when you do it and be aware of it.
PROJECT ROUND UP
Prudence ~ The Parasol Protectorate Abroad Book the First: Rough draft. Release date Fall 2013. Got peeps floating, about to land in the Maltese Tower but have had to pause to do edits on D&D.
Etiquette & Espionage ~ Finishing School Book the First: Release date Feb 5, 2013. Working promo schemes.
Deportment & Deceit ~ The Finishing School Book the Second: Revising now, building up word count before I chop it down.
Manga ~ Soulless Vol. 2: (AKA Changeless) Reviewing chapter by chapter, each drops on YenPlus by subscription. Print release tentatively Dec. 2012.
BIG FAT SPOILER ALERT on the Parasol Protectorate series! Really, DON'T READ THE BLURB ON AMAZON if you haven't read the other books first!
The Omnibus hardback editions are limited run through the SciFi Bookclub only.
The manga editions, Vol. available in print, Vol. 2 by subscription to YenPlus.
Most short stories available in ebook form world wide!
The first Finishing School book ~ Out Feb. 5, 2013
I'm interviewing Lilith Saintcrow on the Orbit bog.
Quote of the Day:
"Books have to be read (worse luck it takes so long a time). It is the only way of discovering what they contain. A few savage tribes eat them, but reading is the only method of assimilation revealed to the West."
~ E.M. Forster